An Unforgettable Day

An Unforgettable Day In America

Everybody has a unforgettable day in the life. I won’t forgot the day that I celebrated my first real Christmas in America. The Christmas due to arrive and my birthday is around Christmas. I did not want to hold the birthday party again .So I did the birthday and Christmas together. The day before Christmas day ,I went to the Christmas shop with my roommate and bought any decorations for decorate my room .Then we were went to buy any gifts put in my house. There are many fruits on the table, and words on the door that was “welcome to my house and happy Christmas”. Soon after ,the whole room was decorated very beautiful by us.

In the second day was Christmas .My hostfamliy was woke up very early and waiting for some people .Five minutes later ,I saw an old man and his family were coming to my house .We were very warmhearted to meet everyone. There are so many people in the house and we were very excited.seeing all the people before my eyes, I felt that I was the happiest man in the world.

In the afternoon, I left my house and go downtown with my friends. Although many of the shop were closed, we could see many people walked on the street. Every thing is white and

quiet, it made us felt sedateness.

In the evening, all people seat on the sofa and had a look Christmas TV .During that time ,my hostmorher called me and let me went to my bedroom .She given to me a big socks while I was coming.I opened the socks and saw there were a lot of chocolate. I really love that kind of chocolate and I said thank you to her and she also felt very pleased.
That was an unforgettable Christmas.

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The Real Childhood
Nowadays,more and more children are wasting their time on computer games and video games, and when they grow up, they will notice that that time isn't a real wonderful childhood
When I was a child, I often wayched TV.Then my father came and told to me I was wasting the time,I was losing my childhood.
Now I am looking forward to listening to my father talk about his childhood.At that time,he spent time on the farm helped with my grandfather or played with baby sheep.He breathed the fresh air and drank from the mountain spring,but now I can't do those things because the air populltion becomes worse and the water is not clean either.
In the evening ny father and his friends lay down on the top of the small hill,they sang a song,felt the cool wind and smelt the grass and trees.....
As for me,I cando none of them, the only thing I can do is play the computer. I chat with my friends on the internet. We are far way from the nature. It's really bad for the children's health. This childhood is not what we want,but it never comes back.
I think when I become a father and I talk about my childhhood to my son.I only could say:"an ipod,a computer and some internet friends is what I had in my childhood